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Discarded – Book Review

January 16, 2021 by hpholo 1 Comment

Never underestimate the power of a good title, y’all. I read this entirely because its series name was Dumpstermancer – and ended up finding a surprise favorite.

In Discarded (Dumpstermancer #1) by Michael J. Allen, talented spell architect Elias Graham has just been released from a hellish magical prison, having served a sentence of 100 years. For a crime he didn’t commit. After he was framed by his closest friends.

And all he’d wanted to do was use his magic to help people.

Now, barred by law from using magic and without a friend in the world, Eli’s only option is to live on the streets. Still bitter from the betrayal, he only wants to go as unnoticed and unbothered as possible – but the magical forces around him have other plans. Thoth Corp, the magic-dealing corporation he helped build, has been secretly turning people into monsters, and the local fey – long thought extinct – need his help before those monsters wipe them out.

But Eli is the most unwilling of heroes…

Simply put, Discarded is unlike any fantasy I’ve ever read, urban or otherwise.

In a genre where most heroes are gung ho for their adventure (even if they take some convincing to start it) and are usually sent off with some kind of aid or magic weapon, Eli stands out as a character who doesn’t want to leave his alley and starts out with literally nothing of use, not even access to his own magical ability. He’s as vulnerable as any other homeless person struggling to survive on the scraps of society, and it is from this that the novel’s strength is derived.

That its protagonist is homeless already makes Discarded stand out from other fantasy novels, but the brunt of its strength is in how brutally and vividly realized Eli’s homelessness is. He isn’t the sort of character who overcomes challenges easily Because He’s The Main Character. He’s the sort of character for whom staying warm, sheltered, and fed is a struggle on top of his magical struggles. When the author describes the conditions he faces, the reader can feel the cold in his alley and fear the results of a nearby woman’s misunderstood scream, and enough of those conditions go wrong for him that the reader has no confidence that he’ll succeed, or succeed in the way he wants to. (Especially considering that the forces that worked to frame him in the first place are still actively working against him.) All this combined makes the book intensely suspenseful – and that’s even before you consider the magical plotline.

Speaking of which, the magic of this setting is fascinating. This is a modern setting parallel to our own where magic has been (mostly) tamed and franchised, where even non-magically-talented people can buy spell boards and components at the magical equivalent of the Apple Store and use them to do any number of petty miscellaneous things. It’s a setting where “mananets” convey magic with the same efficiency of electrical lines – which are still present in this world, as magic and technology coexist, if a bit awkwardly. (Eli holds that magic is just science that hasn’t been figured out yet, but many in the setting view the two as naturally separate.) Eli himself was once at the center of this magical boom, being one of the founders of magical super-franchise Thoth Corp, and this forms another huge part of his character.

Eli could be a hard character to like. He’s an intensely bitter person, and so stubborn about it that he refuses help from even well-meaning people. Some of this comes down to pride – even homeless, he holds himself to a high standard of self-sufficiency – but much of it comes down to the fact that he was so thoroughly betrayed before the story started. After all, his forays into magic began because he wanted to help people with it, until his companions decided to take his company on a more duplicitous, careless route and got rid of him in such an extreme way that it resulted in him spending the equivalent of a century in a magical prison known as The Wasteland, where his punishment was to simply suffer other prisoners in a desert with limited resources. His soul is so scarred by the horrible depth of those circumstances that he sees no point in going out of his way to do any form of good, if there’s a chance it could result in that.

And so while the reader might sometimes be frustrated by his obstinance, the reader also completely understands why it’s there, and this makes him a lot more sympathetic than he would be otherwise.

The fey characters merit a mention, too, for while they are the creatures of fairy tales, they’re not the nice Victorian ones. These fey are straight out of folklore, manipulative with their own codes of etiquette and honor, and while these characters are likable – and essential, in that they force Eli to join his own story – they pose threats to his well-being just as often as they offer boons, and are as much responsible for the story’s tension as they are its victories.

If I were to complain about anything in this book, it’s that there are enough typographical errors to notice, but they read more like the uncaught artifacts of dictation software than lack of skill, and they weren’t distracting enough to detract from the story. (And honestly the only reason I’m mentioning this is because I feel like I should have at least one negative thing to say in this review, lest it read like the unbalanced gushing of an unabashed fangirl. Plus, given the rest of the review, it’s not like the author’s skill is in question.)

In short, read this book. Urban fantasy readers will find a vividly realized world with all the magical quirks and suspense that they know and love, while non-fantasy readers will find an unexpectedly earnest look at the practical struggles of homeless life. Discarded is easily one of the best books I’ve read this year, and absolutely recommended.

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Note: Holo Writing is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program and, as such, may earn a small commission from any product purchased through an affiliate link on this blog.

Filed Under: Reviews Tagged With: Action, action adventure, adventure, discarded, dumpstermancer, fairies, Fantasy, fey, homeless, homelessness, Magic, Michael J. Allen, Urban Fantasy

H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist – Anime Music Mashups

January 6, 2021 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Welcome back to H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist, wherein I share random fun videos that have made their way onto the video playlist that primes my brain for writing. 😄

Anime music mashups have become one of my favorite YouTube subgenres as of late, and here are two of my favorites: “Durarara Off Your Shoulder” and “It’s An Adventure Right Right Back Where We Started From,” both by Nakinyko.

https://youtu.be/x3YPNW3sUoc

Filed Under: H.P.'s Procrastination - er, Pumped for Writing Playlist Tagged With: aya hirano, bouken desho desho, dirt off your shoulder, durarara, jay z, maxine nightingale, nakinyko, right back where we started from, sleigh bells, theatre brook, uragiri no yuukake, YouTube, youtube mashup, youtube mashups, youtube music

H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist – “I’m a Bee”

December 30, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Welcome back to H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist, wherein I share random fun videos that have made their way onto the video playlist that primes my brain for writing. 😄

This one randomly popped up on my YouTube feed one day, and given that I love puns, bees, adorable things, and bops, it hasn’t left my head since. 😊

Filed Under: H.P.'s Procrastination - er, Pumped for Writing Playlist Tagged With: adorable, Animation, bee, bees, black eyed peas, Cute, da sassy owl, i'm a bee, imma be, pun, puns, so fly, youtube animation

H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist – “Welcome to the Christmas Parade”

December 23, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Welcome back to H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist, wherein I share random fun videos that have made their way onto the video playlist that primes my brain for writing. 😄

My YouTube algorithm is finding me some top-notch listening material this season, y’all. Bask in its glory. 🤣

Filed Under: H.P.'s Procrastination - er, Pumped for Writing Playlist Tagged With: all i want for christmas is you, christmas mashup, christmas mashups, christmas music, Happy Holidays, holiday music, mariah carey, mashup, Merry Christmas, my chemical romance, oneboredjeu mashup, the black parade, youtube mashup, youtube mashups

H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist – Everything League of Legends

December 20, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Welcome back to H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist, wherein I share random fun videos that have made their way onto the video playlist that primes my brain for writing. 😄

And pssh, like I’m gonna love animated music videos and not stream everything League of Legends on repeat. 😋 Here are my favorites!

Filed Under: H.P.'s Procrastination - er, Pumped for Writing Playlist Tagged With: (G)I-DLE, 2wei, animated music video, animated music videos, awaken, cailin russo, chrissy costanza, edda hayes, Jaira Burns, k/da, league of legends, Lexie Liu, madison beer, more, phoenix, POP/STARS, riot games, valerie broussard, Warriors

Grave Mercy – Book Review

December 19, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Nun assassins, y’all.

I’m not sure why the marketing didn’t just splash that all over the front of Grave Mercy, as once I heard that description, I was all over this book.

For those who need more, here is the description from the book itself:

Escaping from the brutality of an arranged marriage, seventeen-year-old Ismae finds sanctuary at the convent of St. Mortain, where the sisters still serve the gods of old. Here she learns that the god of Death himself has blessed her with dangerous gifts—and a violent destiny. If she chooses to stay at the convent, she will be trained as an assassin and serve as a handmaiden to Death. To claim her new life, she must be willing to take the lives of others.

Ismae’s most important assignment takes her straight into the high court of Brittany, where she must pose as mistress to the darkly mysterious Gavriel Duval, who has fallen under a cloud of suspicion. Once there, she finds herself woefully under prepared—not only for the deadly games of love and intrigue, but for the impossible choices she must make. For how can she deliver Death’s vengeance upon a target who, against her will, has stolen her heart?

Grave Mercy by Robin LaFevers, the first in the His Fair Assassin trilogy, is possibly one of the finest kick-butt-girl-assassin books out there. It’s high on action, drama, strong-but-not-stereotypical heroines, and lack-of-love-triangles—and the one romance that it does develop emerges slowly and believably. Add it to your reading list now, but if you need more reasons why you should, read on:

Despite its length (a hefty 549 pages), Grave Mercy is an astonishingly quick read. The chapters are short and nearly always end with a cliffhanger or similarly intriguing bit of information. The plot itself, too, carefully balances the machinations of court drama with the violent clashes that readers expect of assassin books, so there’s literally never a slow moment.

For some readers, though, the opening will be slightly frustrating. Ismae herself doesn’t become an interesting character until she goes to court. Until then, she strikes me as someone who would be a real downer at parties. Pretty much every emotion she has is serious, begrudging, and usually made in relation to her abilities and position as an assassin for Saint Mortain. She also begins with a nasty man-hating streak that I found exaggerated at best, grating at worst—but I suppose if my only interactions with men consisted of an abusive father and husband, I probably wouldn’t like men, either. Still, it does read like a tiny tumblr rant when she ponders using her finely honed Saint-given assassination skills to kill a man who groped her in a tavern.

Once she reaches court, however, she blossoms as a character. She finds that she’s not as equipped for the job as she thought she was, but even so, learns to handle her inadequacies with competence, and never lets her insecurities get the better of her. When faced with a problem, she never whines about it; she finds a way to overcome it, which is not only admirable but far less exhausting to read. Truly, she faces so many challenges in each chapter that she can’t risk stopping. I’m pretty sure that if she’d stopped to whine, she’d have missed pivotal plot information. The novel moves that quickly, and the stakes are that high.

Though I read the book for its assassin action, I was pleasantly surprised by the tension of the court scenes, too. There’s a whole ton of political mess going on in this setting—France is threatening invasion, the twelve-year-old Duchess of Brittany needs armies to defend the duchy, and the main way she’ll be able to secure those armies is accepting one of any number of marriage offers, the most militarily promising of which is to a total scumbag. She knows there are traitors about in the court, loyal to either the French or to the scumbag, but she doesn’t know who they are, and the novel is written so that nearly everyone’s allegiance is called into question at one point or another. Ismae is determined to weed out the traitors, but this is where her failings challenge her. She can spy, of course, but over half of spying at court is done through sneaky, clever interpersonal relations, and Ismae’s social skills sometimes risk jeopardizing her goals. She also doesn’t know if she can trust the people she’s chosen to ally with, which adds a further layer of tension—especially when she falls in love with one of them.

This brings me to another of the novel’s strong points. The romance that buds between Ismae and Duval is a refreshing one. Never does it become a focus of the novel—both characters acknowledge that they have more important things to do than be all lovey-dovey—but when it hits, it hits hard, to great suspenseful effect. The last quarter of the novel is intense anyway, but the tension introduced by the romance makes it better. That the romance is introduced gradually, and as a byproduct of the two working together to save the duchy makes it even better, as does the fact that it is largely a positive relationship, despite its politically-motivated bumps.

That romance actually reminded of the slow romances between Seraphina and Kiggs in Seraphina and Katsa and Po in Graceling. Similarly, Ismae’s relationship with the young duchess reminded me of Katsa’s with Bitterblue, and the mental sharpness of the duchess reminded me of Seraphina’s Princess Gliselda. And when a book can draw comparisons with not one, but two of my favorites, it’s an excellent thing.

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Note: Holo Writing is a participant in the Amazon Services LLC Associates Program and, as such, may earn a small commission from any product purchased through an affiliate link on this blog.

Filed Under: Reviews Tagged With: assassin, assassins, Book Review, book reviews, graceling, grave mercy, highly recommended, his fair assassin, nun, nun assassins, nuns, robin lafevers, seraphina, Young Adult

H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist – “Delta”

December 16, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Welcome back to H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist, wherein I share random fun videos that have made their way onto the video playlist that primes my brain for writing. 😄

Today’s is another animated music video, this time for “Delta” by C2C. Between its sharp Cartoon Network-meets-classic sci-fi illustration design and the way its animation complements the movement of the song itself, it’s another treat to watch. Enjoy!

Filed Under: H.P.'s Procrastination - er, Pumped for Writing Playlist Tagged With: animated music video, animated music videos, Animation, c2c, crcr, delta, music video, music videos

Authors Just Talk About History – Virtual Panel

December 10, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Hey, everyone! The next Authors Just Talk About… virtual panel is coming up soon on Thursday, December 17th @ 8pm EST! 😀

Join me and professional history nerds David Weber, James Young, and Terry Maggert as we chatter about…well, history!

As always, the panel will be streamed on Facebook, but here’s the Zoom link for those who’d prefer to watch there.

See you next week! 😄

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UPDATE: The YouTube archive is here (and below)! Though, of course, if you’d like to watch on Facebook, you can do that here, too. 😄

Filed Under: Authors Just Talk About... Tagged With: against the tide imperial, an uncertain concept, author chat, Authors Just Talk About..., David Weber, Halfway Dead, history, Honor Harrington, james young, panel, Panels, safehold, Starcaster, Terry Maggert

H.P.’s Procrastination – er, Pumped for Writing Playlist- “Starlight Brigade”

December 9, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Before I start writing, I often kick-start my creative brain by watching creative videos on YouTube.

Granted, sometimes this turns into outright procrastination, but it’s also led me to discover some neat stuff, so here’s a new feature showing off random cool videos that I’ve found, which have in turn become part of my “Pumped for Writing” playlist. 😀

I love animation, and I especially love animated music videos. One of my favorites is that for TWRP and Dan Avidan’s “Starlight Brigade,” which continually leaves me disappointed that it’s not, in fact, the opening for a retro-homage anime. Enjoy!

Filed Under: H.P.'s Procrastination - er, Pumped for Writing Playlist Tagged With: animated music videos, Animation, Anime, anime music video, anime music videos, knights of the light table, music video, music videos, starlight brigade, twrp

Authors Just Talk About Tea – Virtual Panel

November 20, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

One panel’s barely finished, and we’re already on to the next! 😀

On Thursday, December 3rd @ 8pm EST, join H.P., Faith Hunter, Kimberly Richardson, and Lydia Sherrer as we chat about that most cultured and comforting of beverages – tea! ☕️

As always, the panel will be streamed on our Facebook page, but here’s the Zoom link as well for those who’d prefer to sign up there.

See you next month! 😀

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UPDATE: Here’s the YouTube archive! You can also watch it on Facebook if you prefer.

Also, panelist Kimberly owns a tea company, and you can check it out here! 😀

Filed Under: Authors Just Talk About... Tagged With: author chat, Author Interview, author life, Authors Just Talk About..., Faith Hunter, h p holo, Jackie Verona, Jane Yellowrock, Kimberly Richardson, Love Lies and Hocus Pocus, lydia sherrer, Soulwood, Tea, The Decembrists, The Wizard's Way, virtual panel

Authors Just Talk About Feel Good Stuff – Virtual Panel

November 16, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

It’s almost time for the next Authors Just Talk About… panel!

During this crazy time of year, in this, the craziest year, sometimes you just need to chill and chat about feel good stuff. So that’s exactly what we’re doing! 😁

Join H.P., William Joseph Roberts, Lydia Sherrer, and Benjamin Tyler Smith this Thursday, November 19th @ 8pm EST as we chatter about our favorite feel good movies, books, and other fun comfort things!

Again, the event will be streamed on our Facebook page, but here’s the Zoom link for those who’d prefer watching there!

See you later this week! 😀

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UPDATE: Here’s the archived panel on YouTube! You can also find it on our Facebook page!

Filed Under: Authors Just Talk About... Tagged With: author chat, Author Interview, author life, Authors Just Talk About..., Benjamin Tyler Smith, Blue Crucible, Blue Salvation, comfort, comfort stuff, comfort things, feel good, feel good stuff, feel good things, fLUX Runners, Love Lies and Hocus Pocus, lydia sherrer, The Wizard's Way, Wildcat, William Joseph Roberts

Adventures in Mystery Pikachus

November 9, 2020 by hpholo Leave a Comment

Y’ALL. There’s been a mystery brewing in our yard today. 😳

When I went to see Jacob off to work at The Real World Job, we spotted a weird item in our neighbor’s yard. We thought it was just a leaf bag, but checked it out anyway to find that it was a random Pikachu beanbag. Because of its placement, we figured it wasn’t intended as a decoration, but left it and didn’t think any more of it.

Anyway, Jacob goes to work. I go to the porch to write. When I get up for my break walk, THE PIKACHU HAS MOVED. 😳 And it’s right next to my water hose, right around the corner of my house, perfectly positioned where I can see it. 😳😳 Which is SUPER CREEPY. 😳😳😳

(But, like, still a Pikachu, so I’m not as creeped out as I should be. 🤣)

So I go to investigate this thing. Turns out that it’s not a beanbag, but a giant costume mask…that is light enough to be blown about by the wind. Which proceeds to blow it across my driveway. And is a lot less creepy than anything I was imagining. Thus, by the Rules of Yard Wind, I now have a new writing buddy! #mysterysolved ❤️

Actually I’m going to walk the neighborhood later to see if it blew out of anyone’s yard, ‘cause it’s a really well-crafted mask, and I’d hate for someone to put all that work into it only to lose it. If it doesn’t get claimed, though, IT MINE. 😁

UPDATE: Mystery solved again! It belonged to our neighbors across the street! 😃 Turns out they’d bought it for their son’s birthday party and had been looking for it all day.

Also, it’s not handmade, but rather purchased online for what they claimed was an embarrassing amount of money – which is a super cool thing to learn about my neighbors. As I return their Pikachu mask in my favorite Pikachu shirt. 😄

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Originally posted on H.P.’s Instagram.

Filed Under: Adventures Tagged With: Cosplay, costume, Halloween, halloween costume, mask, Mystery, Pikachu, pikachu costume, pikachu mask, pocket monsters, Pokemon

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